Kevin Andrews

Hey AR Group, thanks so much for the badge as I really enjoyed participating. Lots of great content and ideas provided in your OER! I share this badge with everyone who participated as there were so many insightful comments. All the best! K

Hi Maker space Team! Thanks so much for the badge as it was a pleasure to participate. I share it with everyone as there were so many great comments and ideas posted! All the best! K

Hi Mackenzie, thanks for the reply. Sounds like you have it figured out; well said!

Hi Janna, thanks so much for you review and reply. I will add to my reflection to be more specific on my goals and audience. You also provide an interesting last question in your review and to think about it, CADE would facilitate VTS teaching for schools to enhance their existing curriculums providing necessary workshops for teachers so as they can add to their teaching styles another method to keep the kids engaged.

Hi Justin. I had a look at the link you provided for your revised pitch - I think it is the same one? It says on YouTube it was Published on Aug 5, 2017? Might there be a different link? Well done by-the-way for changing it! Great effort!

Hi Scott, thanks for your thoughts and ideas. Like Scott, I agree that there might be too much text and not enough images and graphs to go along with the theme of using images to learn. Will include that into my final reflection as potential changes to the pitch. Thanks again.

HI Agnieszka, thanks for your support and appreciate your thoughts and ideas. I appreciate your thoughts on making a better argument for investors as there should be projected costs and anticipated profits included within the business model. Will add that to my reflections for sure. Also, totally understand the different cultural implications of using self-promotion from the CEO and how more sensitivity should be brought to the table if this was a true venture. Thanks.

Hi Ryan, thanks for your kind words and helpful assistance. I like your thoughts of making sure it is SCORM compliant and will at that thought to my final comments on this assignment.

Hi Ghassan, thanks for your comments and thoughts on my project. You point on having people globally to represent the company would be helpful and I have taken that into account in my final reflection to this assignment as a global presence it important if this project is to reach all people. Will also address the profit margin as it may have been too low to pull in potential investors in addition to showing them how much can be made with investment.

Hi Eva, Good venture and elevator pitch! I enjoyed your tone and relevant animations in the elevator pitch along with the overall message as it was clear to understand.  It kept my attention the entire time as I felt like I was learning all about MyClinical. With respect to your venture pitch you had some good content on the website as you clearly outlined both the problem and your solution for potential investors. I liked the market trends, focus, and competition page as it further facilitated your research to prove to investors you are serious about your product. That said, I was left looking for a more developed business model. Every investor wants to get their money back, so it's important to tell them how you plan on generating revenue. For instance, showing  a list of the various revenue streams for your model and the timeline for each of them. How will you price your product and what does your competition charge? You should also discuss the lifetime value of your customer and how you will keep him engaged. Along those same lines, every business has competition even if you think you're offering something new and unique. List your competition and why your product/service is different from their model. If your competitors have been acquired, list acquisition prices and who acquired them. Finally, if you have already raised money, you will want to talk about how much, who invested and what you did with it. If you have not raised money yet, talk about what you have accomplished with minimal funding. If you have personally funded your startup, make it known. Investors like to see entrepreneurs who have invested their own money. If you’re pitching to raise capital, list how much you're looking to raise and how you intend to use the funds. Again, thanks for a great pitch as I would be very interested as a potential investor.