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Hi Tyler, I like your elevator pitch. You hit the most essential points, the problem, the solution, your skills, and interest. Because investors always check how they would benefit from investing, adding some information in the elevator pitch about the market would increase the chance to catch investors’ attention. A question I had after reading your market analysis was how you would sell and ensure a revenue on your product?

Hi scott, You have done a great job presenting the problem and the solution in your elevator pitch. I also like how you introduce the market potential of FocalEd. Adding more precise market information in the market forecast and analysis certainly boosts the chance to attract more investors. Great job!

Hi Michael, I like how your elevator pitch succinctly presents the problem and a solution. Your skills and interest in Music matters are also clear in your pitch. Something I think would strengthen the pitch would be to briefly present the market too. Potential investors usually check the sale market evaluating how they would benefit from investing in the venture. Your venture pitch shows a market that has lots of potential. The information you provided about the market is useful to decide to invest in the venture.

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Hi Michael, I like how your elevator pitch succinctly presents the problem and a solution. Your skills and interest in Music matters are also clear in your pitch. Something I think would strengthen the pitch would be to briefly present the market too. Potential investors usually check the sale market evaluating how they would benefit from investing in the venture. Your venture pitch shows a market that has lots of potential. The information you provided about the market is useful to decide to invest in the venture.

Hi Mel, Your elevator pitch presents the problem and the solution that Hive offers. It also gives a glance at the market which enables to have an idea of the possible revenue of the venture. Good idea to provide your background that shows your skills. Your venture pitch is brilliant. The way you present your targeted market help to have an idea of the possible revenue that Hive would generate.

Hi Matt, I couldn’t agree more with you that the current educational system needs some tweaks to adapt to the global evolving economy. I like your idea to revolutionize the entire system of education. There are many things in education that such a venture could positively change. Being more precise on the problem and the solution will provide potential investors with ideas on how they could contribute to the venture and generate profit from their investment. The value of your venture that is providing users with what they need to learn is very appealing. Your venture is aiming at a very bid market. As regards to your elevator pitch, I like the idea because it has strong value, however, adding incentive information on the market, and precision on the problem MeLearn will solve would attract potential investors to ask for more details. Also, after listening to your pitch, I thought not all learners know what they want to know or learn and how to do so. Young people usually K-12 education are still figuring this out. Or maybe students would learn just about everything in the state's curriculum with teachers that offer the best quality teaching and learning styles? Your venture certainly got me thinking.

Hi Manize, Your elevator pitch is brilliant. You present the problem and pinpoint the solution. I also like how you present the market. Adding information about your background that would give your skills and interest in leading this venture would boost the pitch. This usually assures investors that you know your topic and easily attracts them to check in to hear your venture pitch. The statistics on the eLearning market that you presented shows that the business is favorable for the venture. From a sales viewpoint, the statistics of the revenues on the current market from your buyers (eLearning corporate industries and educational institutions) on similar services that Rise 360 provides would give a better idea of what could the venture revenue. This information would facilitate a decision to invest.

Hi Anouk, Great elevator pitch. I will certainly invest in your pitch. The problem and the solution are clearly stated. I like how your financial proposal and how you present your skills and interest in providing mountain safety courses. From a sales viewpoint, as a potential investor, adding in the elevator pitch an estimate of the number of people that would require the service that Safe2Summit offers would boost the interest to check-in for the venture pitch, which is amazingly presented. I enjoyed reviewing your work.

Hi Kendra, Great pitch! I like how right at the beginning you gave an idea of the size of the market that Gradhat is targeting. The problem is clear and the solution is amazingly stated. You should also think of saying something about you that would give an idea of your skills and possibly the reason for your interest in solving this problem. It sends a signal to potential investors that you know your topic and you have what it gets to lead the venture. As a potential investor, I looked in the venture for information such as the proportion, or the number of people that would need the service offered by GradHat to have an estimate of what could be the revenue. It is clear that the problem that Gradhat is solving exist and would change how people learn and develop professionally, however, information that would give an idea in terms of the revenue that GradHat would regenerate would facilitate a decision to invest. I enjoy reading your work.