A definite NO for me. I watched the film…

A definite NO for me. I watched the film several times and still remain unconvinced, a bit confused, and definitely not excited by the pitch. A true elevator pitch – only words – should leave me dreaming, excited, and desiring more information. This pitch is dry, incredibly vague, does not address pain point, solution, differentiation, marketing, championship or return — it really only highlights the ‘ask’.