Abraham, I found your entire pitch to be compelling and very professional. Your rationale is clear and sets up the perfect background for your product. Your venture pitch addressed the pain points (not enough people to fill the skill trades jobs opening up; lack of education in early education to expose students to these trades) and you’ve created a product to answer it. As a venture analyst, I see the value in creating a product that utilizes VR and can be used in the K-12 level; what really sells it to me, as an educator, is that your product can immerse students in a variety of trades skills in a safe way. Your proposed timeline shows a clear map of the future direction of your product. I wonder how your product will be received by current teachers teaching trade skills. My colleague teaches shop in high school, and everything she does is very hands on; how would she, hypothetically, use Trades-Explorer in her class? I would love to see your elevator pitch, when you get a chance to fix the link!
Abraham, I found your entire pitch to be…
31 Jul
Just as I posted this, I was able to load your elevator pitch! Your pitch is informative, and I like the minimal clean graphics used. There was not too much text and I was able to focus on your text. Well done presenting your pain points from the get go, it drew my attention right away. Well done!
