Charmaine, as an educator I would defini…

Charmaine, as an educator I would definitely purchase your product. I teach grade 6/7 and every year, I’ve had at least two (if not more) students who are English Language Learners. As an 11-13-year-old student, it’s embarrassing (to them) to be reading a “magenta” levelled book while their classmate is reading a novel. It’s also extremely boring, especially when they can read big, difficult texts in their own native language. Most of our levelled books and the books on Raz Kids aren’t just ‘right’, as your elevator pitch addressed! So, on that point alone, I think your venture addresses an important pain point that potential investors should capitalize on. For your financials, perhaps more information on how the money will be spent, how much your product will cost, and how you will market the product, will give potential investors more confidence in Just Right Reading. Your About Us page states that you don’t currently have a software developer for your product, but your “ask” is for $200,000 to develop the program. As a potential investor, I would be hesitant to give my money to a venture that doesn’t have someone that can execute the product they say they are making; I would want my money be put to use by an experienced software developer who can make Just Right Reading as described.