Feedback: Glad to see you used a multime…

Feedback: Glad to see you used a multimedia platform to introduce your product. Voice was nice and clear and visuals were pleasant. I like Video scribe. In terms of your elevator pitch, the whole point was to ASK for money. You need to add it to your elevator pitch. You would not get to the venture pitch at all without having that included in your elevator pitch.You have identified a need in the marketplace, and your app would fill this void. I found the elevator pitch could have made it more interesting to watch and listen if it had more interesting and interspersed images, charts and infographics. I was glad to see you asking for an amount in the venture pitch portion. It would have been a good idea to introduce your partners in this pitch and how you were going to market the idea.

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