Feedback: Great idea for your elevator pitch! I am not a principal, so I don’t know the struggle it is for them (or HR staff of school districts) to sift through resumes, but I bet it would be very time consuming. One suggestion I have is that perhaps your product could also extend to market places outside of education? I realize you probably narrowed the marketplace since this is an education course, but my wife who works in HR in another industry is always complaining to me about how resumes hardly ever give clear indications of who the candidates are. Either way, I think the idea is great, and the pitch was clear. I personally didn’t mind that the elevator pitch didn’t include audio, as it allowed me to go through it at my own pace.