FEEDBACK – Hi Aaron, your pitch is inter…

FEEDBACK – Hi Aaron, your pitch is interesting and I think there is a lot to be developed in student feedback and analytics; from the pitch I understand that your system is designed to measure student achievement and successes which I appreciate, however having seen other products in the market, what will make yours different from the others? I am not expecting too much from a minute speech, but you do bring out the important features of your product and you sell the product which is great in your elevator speech. I find that the speech should be catchy enough to make me want to look forward. I suppose there are pros and cons to stating how much you are seeking from investors in the elevator speech, since it could go two ways really.