Feedback: Hi Leah, I think you have a great idea brewing here. I’ve taught a couple of ESL classes and as its not my field/background I also find that a lot of the resources out there cater to young children and don’t actually challenge my students to further their learning/language skills. Your passion is clearly evident in your pitches. I thought it was impressive that you completed a website, video and a PDF presentation. Should you be able to get this venture off the ground I’d be interested as a consumer!
My only suggestion is that your elevator pitch is quite long. I had trouble keeping mine under one minute as well, but given that its a quick intro to your product, some investors might not be interested to watch that long.