FEEDBACK: Hi Michael, This is an interes…

FEEDBACK: Hi Michael, This is an interesting proposal, though I wonder if your Elevator Pitch does it justice? While the setting of your video looks great, I wonder if recording the audio indoors may have made your pitch a little easier to hear. As an EVA I think the setting of video does not coincide with the venture proposal, and found that it made me question whether I would want to investigate this venture further.

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