FEEDBACK: Hi Natalie, you did a great jo…

FEEDBACK: Hi Natalie, you did a great job in identifying a very relevant pain point in Canada. It is well researched and your passion clearly comes through. However, you haven’t created or presented an ed-tech related venture to address it. I could not find your elevator pitch, and your full length pitch only focuses on detailing the pain point. To improve this pitch, perhaps you can state clearly how it is your venture will solve all the problems that you’ve identified, and communicate the amount of funding that you are looking for to make your venture reality.