FEEDBACK: Hi Ram, I think you created a very fine pitch and “ad”venture with a realistic “problem” we are facing. However as an EVA I am not sure what the solution is you are offering. I would advise you bring the solution somewhat to the front prior diving too much in the challenge, this will keep the interests of a real EVA who wants to see, hear, think, smell business potential. Overall I think you did a nice job! Where did you get the voiceover from?