FEEDBACK: Hi, Sandy: I think you’ve done well creating a focused Elevator Pitch, and the Venture Pitch is direct and easy to navigate. I can appreciate the need for the product, as I’m actually in the opposite situation: I prefer learning about a topic by reading about it rather than hearing someone talk about it. Good work! My main suggestion is to clarify the need that the venture addresses. The Elevator Pitch mentions difficulty reading but it also mentions student difficulty in accessing information, which could suggest the app might help with research. Then the Venture Pitch mentions differences in learning styles. I think that clarifying the one need the app addresses will help to strengthen the pitch. Another issue with the pitch might be clarifying how schools will ensure consistent device availability in classrooms where not all students have smartphones or not all students bring smartphones to class.