Feedback:
Hi Sarah,
I liked your concept. It is very revolutionary and if it can be implemented as you promise, it will be useful also. From what I understood from your elevator and venture pitch is that the neurological concepts are already in practice in Arrowsmith school, but using one-one teachers. You want to create a software interface that will aim to do the same thing as the teacher. I think that is a very good idea. About your presentations, I just felt you can make it a little more visual. Currently, it is a bit text heavy. Also tagging with a bigger brand like McGill is a good idea and creates more recognition.
Good work Sarah.
-Moumita