FEEDBACK: Hi Scott, I really like your e…

FEEDBACK: Hi Scott, I really like your elevator pitch with the personal touch of you actually speaking to the audience. That works great. Your elevator pitch is successful in communicating your value proposition. Your venture pitch is good; you covered the problem or pain and how your solution is tackling the problem. You tell a compelling and credible story that every teacher can relate to. Talking about the features of the product and how it can help teachers makes your story more convincing. Your market analysis and discussion of competing products is good. What I am unsure about is your pricing structure; I believe it is a bit of guesswork you are doing at this stage. I think we would agree that there are some implementation challenges to be overcome but I believe you have a genuine original value proposition. When your venture is ready for investment, I would invest.