Feedback: Hi Shane, Thank you very much for the elevator pitch. On a presentation note, I found the background audio a bit loud which led to some competition between it and your voice. I would much rather hear you! The venture pitch was colorful and animated but also asked too many questions of the audience which took time and were left for the audience to answer. Perhaps a more direct approach would demonstrate the idea by outlining the whole idea clearly in the intro to the main presentation. As an investor I am not sure how this would make a return on my investment. This information would need to be added.