Feedback:
Hi Shane,
Thanks for sharing your venture pitch/elevator pitch. You have a good idea here that is definitely relevant for the modern day classroom/teacher/student.
A few thoughts: the music in your video was a little too loud and it was difficult to hear your voice over the background sounds.
I am wondering how your product is different from the existing blogging platforms out there? Are you re-defining the blog by bringing back the idea of the journal? To me, your idea is good but you need to explain how Visi Journal is different and what the current market is like for this type of product.
Thanks so much for sharing!