FEEDBACK: I appreciate your candid comments in your reflection. I share some of your sentiments. Two things that jumped out at me. I thought your Overview table is excellent because it is very clear. In the section that immediately follows, “How will this help EMR adoption succeed,” you presents the barriers and how to overcome them very well. My suggestion for improvement is for more rigorous proofreading. I’m a stickler for good grammar and spelling and cannot help noticing these examples: The top Canadian (EMR) vendors are as follows (not is as follows), HealthED was founded by me, Riea Elder in 2012 when I discovered (not when she discovered) and so on. Sorry for nit-picking …