Feedback I know you stated that this is…

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I know you stated that this is a fictitious company but I would say that the focus of it is very close to your interests. You make some great observations about the pros and cons of other products in this marketplace and I feel you are knowledgeable about what a gr 7-12 offering would need. There are a couple of items that I might suggest that would help define your venture pitch a little more. 1) The items you raise in the section ‘Barriers to Entry’ are very relevant but it would have been useful for you to provide solutions to each of the points you raised as a way to help an investor feel more confident that your pitch was working to remove these barriers.
2) It would have been beneficial to see at least a mockup of what the process would look like. As an EVA I don’t think I would invest in this venture at this time.

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