FEEDBACK – I like your elevator pitch! Your friendliness and enthusiasm draw the audience into what you want to say about your product. I also like the way you have structured your venture pitch around the what, who, why and so on because it makes it easy to follow along. Another strength is how you’ve matched the target market sector with the know-how of your team, e.g., understanding of the North American and East Asian markets.

I would have liked to see a real physical address of your company rather than a 1-800 number to lend some credibility to your team. How would I know it is not a scam? 🙂 I also felt that the last couple of pages could have been more substantial. The other thing is for more stringent proofreading. Examples: Capilano University, not Universrty, Korea, not Korean. Overall, well done and I enjoyed it.