Feedback: I really like the way you orga…

Feedback: I really like the way you organized your elevator pitch, using the visuals and written information to enhance your audio. I did find that your pitch moved very quickly and at times, you were a little difficult to understand. I had to watch it a couple of times to get the whole gist of the presentation and I am not sure this would happen during a real pitch situation. I like that you went in a different direction and focused on health and safety of various work places. This opens you up to a variety of markets. I think you have a good idea that just needs a little more fleshing out.