FEEDBACK… I really like this concept, Ebru. It is a simple (not so simple) combination of technologies that appears to address a legitimate pain point relevant to your industry. I felt you informed me of all of the areas (numbers, projections, suitable background, etc.) I would expect in an elevator pitch, but for the sake of brevity, a quick reference to the venture pitch may have sufficed for some areas. Your background and pain point explanation could have been shortened (or eliminated) in the elevator pitch, and expanded on in the venture pitch. You really hooked me when you began to describe TeachArch specifically. I am looking forward to reading your venture pitch.
– Scott