FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to give feedback for venture pitches so I think I will go with a two stars and a wish style approach.
2 stars – I think your elevator pitch video has a nice feel to it – the music is suitable, the tone of your voice is calm and relaxed which I think would put potential investors at ease. You have lots of great ideas in terms of how to update journals and make them more interactive. I also like your slogan at the end, “the modern way to journal”. My one wish would be to hear a bit more about what the market is like and the potential for investors to benefit.
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to…
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to…
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to give feedback for venture pitches so I think I will go with a two stars and a wish style approach.
2 stars – I really like the name of your venture it is clever and easy to remember. In your elevator pitch the introductory story was really effective. It set the tone that your venture is solving a real problem. My one wish would be to give a little bit more info on why someone would choose BrigET over trying to go with information/resources that are freely available online.
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to…
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to give feedback for venture pitches so I think I will go with a two stars and a wish style approach.
2 stars – The presentation of your elevator pitch was very well done, it was both clear and well paced. I also liked how you stated your qualifications at the beginning. It was an effective way to establish your expertise and gain the investor’s trust right at the start. My one wish is more related to my own uncertainty of how things work in higher education. I think that support for blended learning programs is a great idea, I am just unsure of whether or not that would happen internally through a professional employed directly by the institution or if a higher education institution would contract that out?
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to…
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to give feedback for venture pitches so I think I will go with a two stars and a wish style approach.
2 stars – I was really impressed with the quality of your pitch video, your graphics look great and you do a good job of speaking about your product. I also like the idea behind your pitch. As an online teacher I would love to have help developing and improving courses that I have inherited. That said I know there just isn’t money (at least in my district) for any development support. There isn’t even TOC release time to work on it, it is all part of your position whether you have time for it or not. So my one wish would be to have another look at who to market to I’m not sure K-12 public schools are in the position to use this currently – maybe private schools would have better resources for this? Or perhaps other post-secondary or training institutions?
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to…
FEEDBACK – I’m not sure the best way to give feedback for venture pitches so I think I will go with a two stars and a wish style approach.
2 stars – I think your pitch was presented with a confident and convincing tone. I also think your passion for creating a locally relevant product would go along way to persuade investors. My one wish would be for a bit more information on the competition and how you differentiate from it as I imagine there are many language learning options on the market. Thanks for sharing your pitch!