It’s nice to see that you are using multimedia to show off your pitches. However, in any elevator and venture pitch there should be an ASK..there was no mention of an amount. You also pitched stemverse which would be a framework of some sorts for augmented reality. But it was very vague. It’s nice that in the venture pitch you discussed a bit more about the framework, but lacked any information on who would build this. Who is your team? Is there any competition? Who is the target market and what are the prerequisites to get into the framework. I like augmented reality, but I think you need to rework the pitch to answer some of the questions I have and also others in their responses. Especially a timeframe and an amount.
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By roma kohutiak on December 3, 2015