FEEDBACK – Mary, your elevator pitch is clearly laid out and so is your venture pitch. Although you identify the problem and articulate the solution quite clearly, I found myself wondering if your solution offers greater value than some of the social media tools that are currently available. Maybe it is my lack of understanding of your solution, but I wanted to compare the features to what Google Groups and Google Communities (for example) offer and found that many of the features were comparable. Community of Practice platforms like Yammer (https://www.yammer.com) and eXo (https://www.exoplatform.com) offer even more features. At the end of your presentation I found myself asking: Great idea but why should I invest in this platform when there are established alternatives available? Would it be more feasible to build a project that customizes and configures one of the existing platforms?