Feedback: On initial viewing of your Elevator pitch, I thought you had an interesting idea, but that your presentation was flat and lacked passion. The pitch is over the one minute limit and tries to do too much. After delving further in to your venture analysis, I am not convinced that your application identifies a gap in the market. It is interesting to that you mentioned that this is not a ‘dating’ app on your home page as I can easily see this app being appropriated for this use. With Google hangouts, it is very easy to meet people online in a safe environment and carry on conversations without putting yourself at risk of meeting a stranger, which makes the idea of using GPS to locate people a little scary. However, I could see this being a great advertising opportunity. Your pitch should be aimed at businesses wishing to advertise on your app and less at app users, which would be second tier marketing. I think if you reworked this pitch from the perspective of attracting advertising dollars you might have a stronger presentation.