Feedback: Shane, such an important tool….

Feedback: Shane, such an important tool. I could see the market opening up for your product among English language learners and even opening a market for multi-lingual visi journals! Wonderful idea! I enjoyed listening to your pitches, your voice is quite soothing. I enjoyed the way you captured our attention with your initial questions about the pain point and your solution. A greater in depth analysis of EVA critique and investment and revenue model on how VISIJournals would be marketable. A suggestion for your audio: the music in your elevator pitch made it difficult to hear your voice at times and there seemed to be a lag in between slides. Well done!