Strengths: I like the statement you used right in the beginning of your elevator pitch, it was a good hook and sparked my interest. I think the concept is interesting and could help a lot of students. You have a very powerful team with Google by your side but it made me wonder: why do you need an investment from me if Google is working with you? Weaknesses: When you stated, “Virtual Angel learns and adapts with your child,” I was a bit confused on how it would learn. I think I was just having a hard time understanding how the product works. I think I would have been more excited about this venture if you discussed in a bit more detail on how the product worked in your elevator pitch (but with a 1 minute time constraint, I can see why you didn’t have enough time to do that). Great work!
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By kgill on August 4, 2014