FEEDBACK Strengths: Your elevator pitch is intriguing, as you drew me in with your practical references. I also appreciated knowing how successful the business is. I think this venture can be very useful to people working in groups (especially in our MET program!). The five-year growth projection in your proposal really paints a picture on the direction your venture is going to be taking—nice touch! Weaknesses: I was hoping that you would have discussed the competition a bit more in your proposal. Overall, you did a great job!