FEEDBACK: Thank you, Ram, for this pitch…

FEEDBACK: Thank you, Ram, for this pitch. I like your presentation of the potential market, financials, and plan to roll out to markets with provincial funding. The idea you’ve presented for 21st century personalized school is general, and I would like to know more details about the venture before going forward. What specific problem does your venture provide a solution to and how will it work? Others have mentioned this, but my issue with the text-to-speech is that it just can’t get intonation and fluency down which makes it difficult to follow and detracts from the pitch. I went back and forth on how no voiceover of my own elevator pitch would effect my A3, but I decided that music and dynamic text could grab the viewer’s attention, and I would consider this.