Feedback: This was a well done pitch with all the components I needed as an EVA. My suggestions have more to do with order and lengthening you pitch a bit. My suggestion would be to start with the problem/solution as you asked for investment before I really knew what you were selling. I love using PowToons. It is a bit tricky to use to get the timing right. I couldn’t read everything on your page because the page turned over and on the last slide I wasn’t able to read as it was only on the screen a couple seconds. I actually went over in my pitch but I think lengthening your timings and starting with the problem/solution would make this a solid pitch. I really liked the problem presented through the doctor’s eyes – almost like a mini-case study. This got me thinking about what your product will do and to learn more. Well done!