Feedback: Well done Erin, your venture pitch gives a solid indication of where your product aims to meet the needs of consumers. In terms of the presentation itself, I wonder if perhaps you could have trimmed down some of the content in order to make the delivery less rapid? I felt that it was a lot of information to take in all at once, but I suppose the beauty of video is we can watch it over again. I liked how you used visuals in addition to your narration, because that did help in the retention of information.