FEEDBACK: You elevator is quite good and you provided lots of facts and ideas in 1 minute of the pitch time. The venture pitch outlines the problem and solution, but you did not do detailed comparison, service by service with your competitors, also did not point to their barriers to entry, and the time needed for your venture to take off, and moreover you do not have a definite ask for money and the use of proceedings. That is crucially important to investors, to see clearly how is their money going to be utilized and therefore assess the investment viability and the risks associated. You have very powerful competitors, so you must come with something that they currently do not cover well, otherwise the market will not respond. Do not focus to small BC market only, think globally! You have too little information provided on the slides and the slides are too static, so consider some fixes, and you venture pitch can go side by side to your elevator and win over the investors. I hope it will be helpful to you. Regards, Milorad.