FEEDBACK: Your product idea is absolutely BRILLLIANT!! I agree that “Health Wearables” is a market that is expanding like crazy and the product you are proposing is very viable. You do a great job of identifying the problem and benefits of this app. With such a strong elevator pitch, I was surprised that you started your Venture Pitch by immediately identifying the goal of how much money you were trying to raise. My concern is that it might brush people away before you have a chance to “hook” them on your great product. However, you certainly make up for it as the pitch continues. WAY TO GO! I would order a BUNCH of these!