FEEDBACK: Your voice is very pleasant and really perfect for pitches! Your main points are clear and easy to follow. I like how you have emphasized your product’s strengths and how they provide a competitive edge over rival products in the market. I am very aware of the background music throughout your pitches, which means it is at times too loud and is competing for the audience’s attention. Also, rather than reading word-for-word from the slides, you could perhaps shorten the text into succinct points on the slides.