Great Elevator pitch. I feel you could g…

Great Elevator pitch. I feel you could go without the background music in the beginning, but love your voice over. You message at the end is inspiring and you sell it very well. You can see in your face and hear in your voice that you want to empower India and your heart believes in this product, so as for an Elevator pitch, you did a great job. Your opening pictures could be more engaging but your ending makes up for it!
Your Venture Pitch I like your opening, I think you relay that there is a need for change with English classwork and express why. Your PowToon is cut off for many slides, so it is hard to read. I think you could have added more content to your slides to make them more appealing but overall enjoyed your presentation. I am still a bit unclear as to how your product will work and could use more data and information on it but did enjoy the concept.