Great pitch, you managed to communicate clearly what product/service within time limit. I think it’s a very good idea. The video and website look very professional and polished which I think is probably the most important factor in getting someone to pay attention and trust you with their investment. The venture pitch was laid out logically and had a good flow to it.
I think it was a smart idea to partner with local post-secondary and sell it as a tool for them to prepare their students. One thing that I think you could have emphasized was the potential for students to create support networks that would help carry them through their studies once they are in their programs. That to me seems almost like a main feature/selling point.