Hello Christine, Your idea is intriguing…

Hello Christine,
Your idea is intriguing and I believe it has potential. I also think you covered major points in your website and venture pitch that a possible investor would have. The one thing that marred the thought behind all your work was recording the elevator and venture pitch off of another device.
Few content gaps that I noticed: marketing plan. Just because there are 2 million students, they will not pay for your product. How do you plan to roll out your product?
A bit more about the team. I know this is fictitious, but you could have marketing, financial and software experts in your team. Perhaps also a serial entrepreneur 😉
What happens after roll out? How do you plan to sustain the product? What is your vision. These are few questions perhaps a venture capitalist would ask.

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