Hello Tomek, thanks for sharing your ven…

Hello Tomek, thanks for sharing your venture. I wasn’t aware of this problem at all! I can’t imagine what you have been going through in the last month… I watched the elevator pitch and, as Briar pointed out, it’s more marketing-oriented rather than investor-oriented. I think that mentioning some statistics -like national suicide rate, and maybe some stats from the Japanese Institutes of Technology if available- could have been beneficial to engage the audience (again, not the buyers of the product, but the investors). The website looks good, I think you could expand on the startup costs and marketing strategies. Competitors? Maybe some NGOs are already doing something about it? Are there going to be different stages? (for the venture, not the product, that you explained very well). I wish you the best of luck with your venture!

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