Hi Ali, as someone with past ESL experience I appreciate the approach. A few questions do come to mind that, if answered, may help make your pitch more effective: how will you meet global ESL-school competition? What are your plans to infiltrate this market, and who is your competition besides Babel 1? What is your ask? What is your ROI? What is your prediction for how long it will take to develop this program? It would also be nice to see your face or hear your voice somewhere on the website, as this would help to boost investor affinity with you.
-M