Hi Christine! I like the concept you hav…

Hi Christine! I like the concept you have come up with. I would suggest modifying the formatting on the page slightly to make it easier to read (white on beige is hard on the eyes). Your elevator pitch is visually appealing and has catchy music, but the way it is filmed is a little distracting and it doesn’t tell the viewer how it will save time or what the instructional/collaborative features entail. In the venture pitch, you spent a lot of time discussing the business model and competition. It would strengthen your pitch to add some visual mockups of your user interface or more specific on why your app will return 1 million back to investors. You’ve got a solid idea to build from!

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