Hi Chrwad
The elevator pitch is clear. You sound energetic. The problem you are solving is clearly stated. I want to know more.
In the venture pitch I like how in a smart way you are able to offer a customizable yet scalable approach for online courses. There is a clear breakdown to the business model. Yet ROI is not realistic. I think this is due to the fact that you measured ROI from Revenue yet ROI is measured on Net Profit on investment. You need to include the expenses before you measure ROI. Also you will face challenges in accreditations and you will need time to build the reputation so you cannot expect to generate the mentioned revenue from the first year. I think you need to consult with a financial expert on putting together the financial projections.