Hi Cris,
I think you have a really interesting idea. Building on a software that already exists is smart – it helps establish the validity of your product. I think your elevator pitch could have utilized more visuals to make it engaging. Your venture pitch was very well researched and thought out. I think focusing on sustaining culture while learning a foreign language is very important and will help set this product apart from others. I also enjoyed the emphasis on personalized learning. You established that there is a market for this product which is important for investors. I think this product would be a good investment since there are not many competitors and the South East Asia market is hot. I would invest in this venture.