Hi Gary,
Really liked your presentation, elevator pitch, and the website. Your product is interesting and you have mentioned the expertise of your team and a market analysis. However one thing I did not fins was competitor analysis, and why your product will be chosen over others? What is your USP?
Also, what is your vision for the venture? I do think this is an investable venture, but it just needs a few more dots to connect the entire picture.
Regards,
Moumita
