Hi Gordon, I have to say I am very impre…

Hi Gordon,
I have to say I am very impressed with your presentation. I think both pitches were very well polished and convincing. The platform connected to the venture very well, and your use of graphics made the data easily relatable. I would have liked to hear more about the features that distinguish it from other streaming platforms specifically for teachers. I suspect your emphasis on the numbers would work well with investors though. I think presenting some out of classroom examples of implementation could also add to your pitch. Can librarians use this? Can parents that are already subscribers access the same educational content or pay the educational price? Overall great pitch and very convincing arguments. Very impressive venture work!

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