Hi Judy, I agree that with Sarah that yo…

Hi Judy,

I agree that with Sarah that you definitely found a gap and the “pain point” is very clearly articulated. I also think that the integration between different types of games as lessons as well as scenarios make it very interesting and likely very useful for the student. I can see my financially-savvy husband investing in something like this!

In terms of your elevator pitch, I found it to be a bit wordy and repetitive at times. While I don’t know if you necessarily have to “show yourself” in the video, having a voice-over or some other type of audio would have made it more engaging. Your website was relatively easy to navigate and I really enjoyed your logo for your idea.

Cheers,
Sarah