Hi Manize, Your elevator pitch is brilli…

Hi Manize,
Your elevator pitch is brilliant. You present the problem and pinpoint the solution. I also like how you present the market. Adding information about your background that would give your skills and interest in leading this venture would boost the pitch. This usually assures investors that you know your topic and easily attracts them to check in to hear your venture pitch.
The statistics on the eLearning market that you presented shows that the business is favorable for the venture. From a sales viewpoint, the statistics of the revenues on the current market from your buyers (eLearning corporate industries and educational institutions) on similar services that Rise 360 provides would give a better idea of what could the venture revenue. This information would facilitate a decision to invest.