HI Melissa, great venture pitch. I really like your idea of helping the northern communities get on the map! I had not realized that even in Canada, these small communities have been left out of something so ubiquitous as googles maps, something I use every day of my life. Your venture pitch I feel is a little slow paced but is clear and to the point as to what you want and need. I like the figures you have to back up you pitch and I really like the how you can invest any amount of money as something as little as just sharing the pitch with friends. Great work.

4 Aug
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Hey Sarah! Thank you so much for your feedback - I need to work on being more concise with my video, especially since Indiegogo recommends the length to be 3 minutes max. I’ve added your observation to my reflection and will do some chopping before I launch. :) Thanks again!
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Hey Sarah! Thank you so much for your feedback - I need to work on being more concise with my video, especially since Indiegogo recommends the length to be 3 minutes max. I’ve added your observation to my reflection and will do some chopping before I launch. :) Thanks again!
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