Hi Michael, I like how your elevator pit…

Hi Michael,
I like how your elevator pitch succinctly presents the problem and a solution. Your skills and interest in Music matters are also clear in your pitch. Something I think would strengthen the pitch would be to briefly present the market too. Potential investors usually check the sale market evaluating how they would benefit from investing in the venture.
Your venture pitch shows a market that has lots of potential. The information you provided about the market is useful to decide to invest in the venture.