I loved your presentation and your concept. I think your elevator pitch does a great job in gaining the attention of the investors. Your website is concise and to the point. You have addressed major questions of any investor so a plus there as well. You also have an experienced and passionate team with a space to start off your venture. So as an investor, I would definitely consider it.
one thing that i would love to see is how you arrived at the ask? Do you think that money is enough for starting your firm? Maybe you did a rough calculation and would like to showcase the major headers?
As someone in the comments suggested, I think partnering with Hunters World peace game will be a smart move. And finally :